Why

[xo~betty~ox]

Why

What did I do to deserve
What I got
No one deserves what I went through
You act like you were right
In everything you did
From the begining
All the way to the end

You left me there
Uncertain and unpure
Cold and bare
And you just walked away
Helped me for a price
One I couldn't pay

And now I'm lying here
Skin errupted in goosebumps
And conquered by fear

Alone
So uterally alone,
I wish to die

Cowering in the shrinking corner
my trembling lips quiver,
"why..."

[tsukasachan]

this is another good poem! ^^

are you gonna be a poet?

[xo~betty~ox]

thanx

lol...no...I can barely write poetry...sometimes my poems turn out alright though...[/color]

[Emeri]

It's kewl! I think u should...if u want to that is! lol

[sebsnumber1fan]

I love it!! <3

[silversparrow04]

Aww that's really got me Betty and the ending was the perfect finishing touch. Excellent poem hun *hugs*

Sandy

[xo~betty~ox]

thanx...I thought the ending worked even though I changed how I make it rhyme. I just woke up, I forgot the word...lol

thanx everyone...you all make me feel so good about my writing![/color]